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I hope you don't mind but I'm going to make some suggestions, because I find there's a couple of things here that maybe could use some tweaking...
The big thing that stands out to me is that her pose seems odd. The legs bent at the knee and her feet not on the ground doesn't seem to support what's happening with her arms. Even if Kit is fiercely supporting her by her butt, the upper body, facial expression and arms are too casual for such an unbalanced pose. I think she either needs to be standing... on something (like a desk or window ledge) or her legs wrapped around him. That would produce a more balanced pose... though I suppose they are jedi... they could levitate
This pose: [link] is an example of a fierce, spontanous hug. From the expression on her face, I'm not sure that's what you want, but the leg position suggests that it might be. I think if you get those two things coordinated (all spontaneous or all casual and deliberate) then this image will be absolutely perfect!
Still, its a great piece of work. I love the time and the details you put into these Star Wars pics, making it seem very much like a scene out of their reality. Keep up the good work
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